I would have cropped the number out. Feels like you’re numbering her. Her expression, the window graffiti, and the curve of the window’s trim are interesting enough without the number.
Brad, everything that comprises this image is perfect. The girl’s serene expression surrounded by the graffiti and yes, the numbers, makes a very impressive, very urban portrait.
For me, the number is an important element; it’s a symbol that represents an idea, and is why it’s in the frame. As many other photographers have said previously, photographs do not tell stories. But rather, they have the ability to release narrative. Which is in concert with the viewer’s experiences and interpretation. I suspect for some the number will suggest something; for others it may not.
I like images that pose questions rather than supplying answers.
October 21st, 2009 on 9:21 pm
this is awesome
October 21st, 2009 on 10:15 pm
I would have cropped the number out. Feels like you’re numbering her. Her expression, the window graffiti, and the curve of the window’s trim are interesting enough without the number.
October 22nd, 2009 on 6:58 am
I’d vote to include the number — much more powerful that way (if that’s what you meant to express).
October 22nd, 2009 on 8:20 am
Brad, everything that comprises this image is perfect. The girl’s serene expression surrounded by the graffiti and yes, the numbers, makes a very impressive, very urban portrait.
October 22nd, 2009 on 8:58 am
brilliant expression on her face, brad!
October 22nd, 2009 on 3:49 pm
Thanks to all that commented – I appreciate it.
For me, the number is an important element; it’s a symbol that represents an idea, and is why it’s in the frame. As many other photographers have said previously, photographs do not tell stories. But rather, they have the ability to release narrative. Which is in concert with the viewer’s experiences and interpretation. I suspect for some the number will suggest something; for others it may not.
I like images that pose questions rather than supplying answers.